Cicero
versus Demosthenes
Dear
Associate,
There
were two great orators from ancient Mediterranean: Demosthenes
the Greek and Cicero the Roman.
It
was said that when Cicero spoke, people exclaimed, "Great
speech. Wonderful message. I couldn't agree with you more."
And they showered him with accolades, adoration and standing
ovations.
It
was said that when Demosthenes spoke, people shouted, "Let
Us March!"
Did
you notice the difference?
Two
great orators. People admired and loved the one. People were
gripped and compelled to act by the other.
Cicero
appealed more to logic. And reason. He carefully crafted his
message to speak to the analytical and rational side of people.
Demosthenes
appealed more to emotion. His message touched, tangled and
transformed people's feelings. Feelings so strong they were
willing to drop what they were doing to go into battle.
Let's
travel in the time machine to the present...
Christy
gave an excellent speech about her involvement with Women's
Empowerment International. They help provide small loans to
the world's poorest women, lifting them out of poverty, and
creating a better future through their own hard work and ingenuity.
You could say WE International is providing the dream of entrepreneurship
to help poor women provide for their families, to better themselves
and to live with a heightened sense of dignity.
She
talked about the founder, Muhammad Yunus. She displayed a
blown-up photograph of Rosario, a Mexican loan recipient who
is making cheese and selling them door-to-door because her
husband is no longer able to work. And she talked about what
we, the audience, can do to help.
Christy
had everyone's attention. You could almost hear a pin drop
throughout her talk. When she concluded, we knew she had more
to share. She did a phenomenal job. Everyone loved her message.
While
there were a few people who wanted to join WE International,
the majority sat on the sidelines. Why is that? Why wouldn't
more people join up or donate their resources after Christy's
fine presentation?
It
goes back to Cicero and Demosthenes...
While
Christy's message was technically sound, it didn't connect
on an emotional level. Her message touched minds. It lacked
the ability to touch hearts. And this is huge.
Here's
the difference in a nutshell:
The
audience thought WE International is a great idea. They felt
good about its purpose and mission. A few donated $20 to become
members.
But
not one person said, "Let us march. I'm going to get
involved. I'm going to pick up the WE International torch
and run with it. I'm going to spread the word to everyone
I know." Not even one.
Here's
an important point...
Practice
to become the best speaker you can. If your audience adores
you, that's a good thing. You're taking up after Cicero.
But
if you really want to move people to action take up
after Demosthenes. You'll touch people on a gut-wrenching,
emotional level. You'll know by appealing to their hearts...
their minds, desires and actions will follow.
Warm
regards,
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