Are
You One Headline Away
from a Winning Promotion?
Dear
Associate,
If
you're engaging in marketing campaigns, website promos, or display ads
and the results have been dismal—what you may need is a gut-wrenching,
killer headline. Marketing experts have known for decades that without
changing anything else but the headline: you can double, quadruple,
or multiply your response rates by tenfold.
Great
headlines may take an hour, a day, or even a week to capture. And great
copywriters sometimes create up to 10, 20, 50, or even 100 headlines
to get the one or three they will test.
If
you don't have the time to do this, I may be able to help...
For
a limited time only, I will create two headlines for you to test. You
can run one or run both in a split A/B test. This offer is NOT available
to the general public—but only for my e-zine subscribers.
Your
responsibilities...
Overnight
your promotion, send me a link to your webpage, or e-mail a PDF attachment
for me to review. If your promo needs more than a headline, I won't
be able to help you. But if it qualifies, then we can proceed.
My
responsibilities...
I
will read your entire promo and after your payment is received, create
two killer headlines for you to generate more sales or leads. Your headlines
will connect with your existing copy. I may need to add a paragraph
to connect the ideas.
Please
be forwarned...
I
will not critique your body copy. So don't try to sneak in a bad promo
to me in an attempt to have me give you a free critique. It won't happen.
I will upload your promo into cyberspace and cut it down with my lightsaber.
But
if you have a good running promotion that's starting to lose steam—a
new headline can give you the boost you want.
What's
the investment?
Only
$97. Which is a fraction of the $200—$250 I normally charge. This
special price is for my e-zine subscribers only. No exceptions. I won't
be checking, so please observe business ethics.
Send
in a check for $97 made out to Ads That Make Money at:
Ads
That Make Money
10755-F
Scripps Poway Parkway #184
San Diego, CA 92131
If
you want your headlines sooner, I'll send you a link by e-mail where
you can pay with your credit card. You will need your card present to
complete the transaction.
Any
guarantees?
There
are copywriters who offer two, three, or more re-writes to keep their
clients happy. I'm not one of them. If you're looking for a guarantee,
you can find some of them on Elance or Craigslist.
This
is a limited time offer and is made available on a first-come, first-served,
time-sensitive basis. Otherwise, you'd have to pay full book. If I get
too busy, this page will come down.
What
to do...
Visit
my Contact Page
and leave me a short note about your promo with your phone number and
e-mail address. I'll contact you with further instructions.
Until
then, you have my...
Best
regards,
Tommy
P.S.
Are you one headline away from a winning promotion? Don't delay. Jump
at this limited time offer now.