Reaping Rich Returns...
Dear Associate, It's Thursday afternoon, two weeks after you sent out your marketing promotion to five thousand on a targeted list. You've got a grand total of 19 orders, which is less than one half of one percent. Not real bad, but it's way below expectations and doesn't reach breakeven. What's next... Should you test a new headline, try a different offer, or include a sexier premium? Or maybe you want to test a handwriting font instead of address labels on your envelopes. Or if you're promoting online—you've proven you can drive traffic to your site, but people aren't buying. You may be shocked to learn that most marketing campaigns never engage their prospects. The owners usually hire writers who either write too much hype, or were never passionate about the product. What you often see online are promotions trying to sell a $39 product and unload $1,259 worth of freebies. Which really cheapens the product. (And the freebies.) And besides, who in their right friggin' mind has the time to read through 7 e-books, 9 special reports, or sit through five one-hour teleseminars after buying the $39 book or program? That dog don't hunt... What you may need is a quick copy tune-up. Taking your existing copy and tweaking it to to get the best performance. Without all the hype, filler and fluff. Because most marketing promos rarely engage their audience—they leave. And you've lost the sale. You could go broke marrying a great product with a weak promo. Back in the hunt... If you have a great product or service, but lack that engaging copy that can bring you exponential returns, I may be able to help... For a limited time only, I will tweak your copy so you can start reaping higher returns right away. And all at a rare discount. This offer is NOT available to the general public—but only for my e-zine subscribers. Your responsibilities... Overnight your promotion, send me a link to your webpage, or e-mail a PDF attachment for me to review. If your promo is beyond hope, I won't be able to help you. But if it's in the ballpark, then we can proceed. My responsibilities... I will read your entire campaign and after your payment is received, tune-up your copy so you can generate more sales or leads. This may include testing new headlines, correcting flow issues, using pithier sentences, deleting paragraphs, and revising anything else that sticks out like a sore thumb. Please be forwarned... I will not rewrite your entire copy. So don't try to sneak in a bad promotion in an attempt to have me write you a new promotion. It won't happen. I don't accept charity cases and I will charge you my normal $12-$20k fees and a portion of the royalties. But if you have a decent promotion that's starting to lose steam—a copy tune-up can double or triple your response. Really. What's the investment? Only $747. Which is a fraction of the $1,000—$2,000 I normally charge. This special price is for my e-zine subscribers only. No exceptions. I won't check, so please observe business ethics. Send in a check for $747 made out to Ads That Make Money at: Ads
That Make Money If you want your promotion completed sooner, I can send you a link by e-mail where you can pay with your credit card. You will need your card present to complete the transaction. Any guarantees? There are well-schooled copywriters who offer two, three, or more re-writes to keep their clients happy. My confession is: I flunked out of that class. If you're looking for a guarantee, you can find some of those more educated writers on Elance or Craigslist. This is a limited time offer and is made available on a first-come, first-served, time-sensitive basis. Otherwise, you'd have to pay full book. If I get too busy, this page will disappear. What to do... Visit my Contact Page and leave me a short note about your promo with your phone number and e-mail address. I will contact you with further instructions. Until then, you have my... Best
regards, P.S. Are you one copy tune-up away from reaping rich returns? Don't delay. Jump at this limited time offer NOW! |